Before this text I have just written jornalistic texts. But yesterday when I was studying I thought about my future and started to think about it.
The dream is the moust incredible feeling that we have, it is like a new world or a different space. In there the limits don't exist, we are free to do are the things that we want and anybody can't finish with this. Everyone needs to dream, without this we are nothing.
With a dream we can have strength to face any obstacle. It doesn't matter the size or the importance of the dream, the important is have it.
I have a lot of dreams and I realy want to fulfill it. I want to have a profession, after I want to have a job, I must to give support for my family, I want to have my family, and I want to give to my childrens everything that I couldn't have. I need to be positive and I have to think that all this is going to happen, so because that I trust in God and I trust in me, because I know that I am stronger to achieve everything that I want, and I'm going to win.
# So tel me. Do you agree with me? Do you have a dream? Which one?
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Hi Sammy!
ResponderExcluirVery nice text \o/
Well I think you're right in trust in yourself! I think that we can get everything that we want if we believe on it and give all of you to get it!
Sincerely I have a dream but I'm not as confident as you are. My dream is after graduate go to another country, like United States or Canada, and keep studying there, after that I want to come back to Brazil and get a good job here and have children. I'm not so confident that I am going to study in another country, neither that I'm going to have a good job... I really don't know why, but I just don't trust im myself.
Just to tell you some mistakes...
"we are free to do are the things..." I think that you don't have to put the second "are" (we are free to do the things)
"and anybody can't finish with this" I think the negative is not the best way to say this sentence (and anybody can finish with this)
Ps.: I don't know about the "with this".. I think it's not very good but I don't know other option.. somebody help me?
in "It doen't matter the size..." I think you can take off the "It" like "Doesn't matter the size..."
I'm not sure but I think that in "the important is have it." you need to put the "to" before "have" like: "the important is to have it" (But I'm not sure)
"I must to give support for my family" I think the right is "I must give support for my family"
and in here "so because that I trust in God and I trust in me, because I know that I am stronger to achieve everything that I want, and I'm going to win" I think you can correct some mistakes: "because (without "so") I trust in God and I trust in me, because I know that I am strong to achieve everything that I want, I'm going to win"
I'm not sure about the "corrections" ask about them for somebody else..
Sorry for the big comment x(
Kisses!!!!
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ResponderExcluirHi, Samantha. Of course, I agree with you.
ResponderExcluirI already wrote it in other blog and I will say again "You need to pursue what you want to do and never give up". I have a lot of dreams and I could come true one dream like the University. I wanted to be at University and now I am.
We can make things to happen in our lives, but we can't have afraid to make mistakes. Good reflection.
Samantha!
ResponderExcluirVery Nice text girl!
Congratulations for your willpower and your certainty in all things. I have a lot of dreams… I want be a good professional and how I said for you in last week, when you make that you love you will don't work any day in your life. It’s very important! Make you love! And be happy :)~ I see mistakes in your text but I think that is typo. In "jornalistic" [journalistic], "moust" [most], "realy" [really], "childrens" [children], "tel" [tell]. It is! kisses! Bianca ;)~~
Hi Samy!
ResponderExcluirI think I don't have dreams! That's awful! :(
I just think in have my house, a beutiful family, and a good job. I'm always running so I don't think very much about it.
I would like to meet other places and coutries, but I have some problems with travels.
I hope I'll change about it and I hope you'll achieve(that's right?) your dreams!
Kisses!