The weekend of fashion in Pelotas was very successful. The event happened on April 4 and April 5 in Centro de Eventos, which is the Fenadoce. A lot of stores were to show autumn/winter 2009 colection.
The criation and production of Moda Pelotas was made by Andrea Guerra, the realization was by Câmara de Diretores e Logistas de Pelotas (CDL), and the city hall of Pelotas, the sponsor were Marvel Ford and Universidade Católica de Pelotas. This event had the support of Pompéia, Carmen Steffens, Mania de Usar and Brix Jeans, which were participating of the fashion show, Moda Pelotas had others supports, like S.F. Soluções de Informática, O Boticário, Express, Idéia, Bosembecker and Beimar Vargas hairdesign.
On Saturday the stores which were participating to the fashion show were UCPEL, Mania de Usar, Intimidades Fashion, Valentina, Onix, Carmen Steffens, Zschornack, Briz Jeans, Pompéia, Minske Nunes, Eliza Andrade, Empório House, Calypso, Vip and Zoomp. According to the public the best stores in the fashion show were Valentina, Carmen Steffens, Empório House and Zoomp. On that day were the Claus and Vanessa's Concert.
On Sunday, was the time of Xavier Malhas e Tecidos, Authentical, Tevah, Emilice Calçados, Kukla's, Ótica Estima, Renner, Brascon, O Recanto Provençal, Flajjolé Malhas, Beth Shineid, Moça Bonita, Maria Loka and Padrão Noivas e Festas. The biggest top model, Paulo Zulu, participated in the fashion show.
The Moda Pelotas is very important to the city, because it gaves recognition for everybody who works with fashion, and this event put Pelotas in the fasion scene.
The criation and production of Moda Pelotas was made by Andrea Guerra, the realization was by Câmara de Diretores e Logistas de Pelotas (CDL), and the city hall of Pelotas, the sponsor were Marvel Ford and Universidade Católica de Pelotas. This event had the support of Pompéia, Carmen Steffens, Mania de Usar and Brix Jeans, which were participating of the fashion show, Moda Pelotas had others supports, like S.F. Soluções de Informática, O Boticário, Express, Idéia, Bosembecker and Beimar Vargas hairdesign.
On Saturday the stores which were participating to the fashion show were UCPEL, Mania de Usar, Intimidades Fashion, Valentina, Onix, Carmen Steffens, Zschornack, Briz Jeans, Pompéia, Minske Nunes, Eliza Andrade, Empório House, Calypso, Vip and Zoomp. According to the public the best stores in the fashion show were Valentina, Carmen Steffens, Empório House and Zoomp. On that day were the Claus and Vanessa's Concert.
On Sunday, was the time of Xavier Malhas e Tecidos, Authentical, Tevah, Emilice Calçados, Kukla's, Ótica Estima, Renner, Brascon, O Recanto Provençal, Flajjolé Malhas, Beth Shineid, Moça Bonita, Maria Loka and Padrão Noivas e Festas. The biggest top model, Paulo Zulu, participated in the fashion show.
The Moda Pelotas is very important to the city, because it gaves recognition for everybody who works with fashion, and this event put Pelotas in the fasion scene.
Hiii Sammy!! I'm here again! ;)
ResponderExcluirWell, your idea for the text was good, but in my opinion this text has lots of own names and it just doesn't let us to "see" your English.
Can you understand what I'm saying?
What do you think guys??
Ah, sammy, I just one to comment about one mistake I found in your text. In this sentence: "The event happened on April 4 and April 5 in Centro de Eventos, which is the Fenadoce." I think that the right is "where" instead of "which" because we use "which" to talk about things and "where" to talk about places. Can you remember that??
But I liked your text anyway! :D
Kisses for you honey!!
Hi Samantha! Very nice text! I didn't know that this event had been such a must-see!
ResponderExcluirAnd giving my contribution to your text: I guess that in the 3rd line it should be either "were there to show" or "went there and showed". Also, remember that "other" has no plural when it comes with a noun (e.g. other supports). Finally, there is an "S" missing after "sponsor" in the 7th line.
Well, that's it! It is very nice to see people are really interacting over here! Cheers!