Today my post talks about the most incredible singer of the century, Michael Jackson, who died in the last Thursday. According to the press he died by heart attack in his own house in Los Angeles.
Michael Joseph Jackson was born on 29 August, 1958 in Gary. He started his cereer with 5 years old in a group called Jackson 5, Michael's brothers were in the group too. After that in 1971 he started to sing alone and years after he was call King of Pop, 5 of his albuns were very sucessfull, like Off the Wall (1979), Thriller (1982), Bad (1987), Dangerous (1991) and HiStory: Past, Present and Future- Book I (1995).
Michael was very well known about his dance, he created a new stile of dance, using mainly the foot, his main dance is the Moonwalk. His appearance's change was a mark and everytime that he appeared in public he was different, very white, with his nose shorter and slim and he was very ugly too. He made lots of plastic surgery and in his end of life Michael was weak and dependent of Morphine, Michael Jackson was preparing 50 concerts in Europe and he was going to start from England, because he was needing money to pay his bills.
So this is just some words about this big singer, because Jackson's career is enormous, unfortunatly he is gone, but his music and his dance always will be reminded by every fan, because Michael Jackson is a star.
Hi, Samantha. I knew Michael Jackson but I did not listen to his songs and I did not watch his videos. With this new about his death I could listen some songs. And I could realize he did not a good relationship with his family. This is very awful.
ResponderExcluirBesides he suffered when he was a child, because his father hit him. And...
He saw her mother to suffer because his father hit her too.
This is sad.
Hii Sammy!
ResponderExcluirI wasn't and I'm not a Michel Jackson's fan but, of course, I know him and his work and I agree that he was very talented!
In my point of view he could never be happy because the life he had is the life that his father wanted and not the life that he wanted for himself!
I still have my doubts about what he used to do with children but I think that we can't judge him for his acts because I think he had his reasons to do that, as well as his father probably had his own reasons to hit in Michael!
Well, I saw some mistakes on your text, take a look:
*"in the last Thursday" - "on the last Thursday" because when the word is composed by "day" we use the preposition "on".
*"and years after" - "and years later" or "and after years" I don't know why but I think what you wrote isn't used.
*"he was call" - "he was called".
*"well known about his dance" - I don't know if it's wrong but I would write "well known because of his dance".
*"and slim" - Shouldn't it be "slimmer" to keep the concordance with "shorter"?? (and I think it would be better if you use the term "thin" instead of "slim" because of the meaning).
*"lots of plastic surgery" - "lots of plastic surgeries" (I'm not sure)
*"he was needing" - "he needed": there are some verbs in English that are impossible of use with "ing". The reason is that or you need or you don't need, you can't be "needing". Could you understand?
*"dance always will be" - "dance will always be"
And I would suggest you to take a look at the punctuations of your text. Sometimes you just put a comma when you should put a point.
That's it Sammy.
Very nice your words about this icon! ;)
Kisses!!
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ResponderExcluirHi Samantha!!!!!!
ResponderExcluirYour text about Michael's life is very nice...
He was and will be always remembered for his famous dance.
All days the programmes show reports about his life. So , I could notice he didn't have childhood. Maybe that's why he built the "rancho Neverland", that has an amusement park, a zoo and other things.
I think despite the problems of his personal life, he will be remembered with my affection.
Kisses Aline.....